i REALLY liked this! this is my first time reading autofiction but i get that itchy, cold-plunge feeling in my stomach reading this and getting inspired. and oooo, i thought the ending was perfect, and the internal asides (commuting, burnt mouth, the birthday) were so relatable and interesting for me to read. i REALLY liked the memory whiplash relating to the steel countertop, i wanted to relate it to the overheard conversation at the end but i don't think that was your intent. regardless, excited to see more!
i REALLY liked this! this is my first time reading autofiction but i get that itchy, cold-plunge feeling in my stomach reading this and getting inspired. and oooo, i thought the ending was perfect, and the internal asides (commuting, burnt mouth, the birthday) were so relatable and interesting for me to read. i REALLY liked the memory whiplash relating to the steel countertop, i wanted to relate it to the overheard conversation at the end but i don't think that was your intent. regardless, excited to see more!
j, thank you SO MUCH 🥺🥺🥺 this is so encouraging!!!! i really appreciate it
don’t get cancer
do u wait until it’s cool enough to eat
give it a test at least
i’ll try my best and lyk